On the fieltrip to Mekarsari I like the fishing. It was my favorite activity. We could go down and dirty than usual. Well, I really enjoyed it because we had a lot of fun when we were fishing in the pond. Then we changed our clothes to the old ones because we would have a dirty thing. We rapidly catched the fish but the fish ran away because it was hard to sneak up on it.
Well, it looked like a slippery one and the fish was not dangerous. What I did was running around and spot a fish. I tried to catch a fish but I could not beacause its tail was flicking itself. Maybe it wanted to move and be free like a bad guy who is trying to escape from the police with a car.
Fishing in the pond smells like a rotten egg. When I touched it felt like it was spanking my hands. What a wonderful day!
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Your score is 15\15 because you use many compare sentences.. grace p
your score is 10/10 becaause you have a paragraph and many compareing sentenses.Vanessa
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